Why the hell does every single person that writes about state formation in Europe in the Early Modern period write like a fucking dickhead?! These people would totally fail in advertising with their massively long run on lines and usage of words that takes even me, 2 seconds to process their intended meaning.
I believe that anything more than two commas in a line makes a sentence unnecessarily hard to process, and renders it needlessly hard to comprehend. You're not writing a steam of consciousness Mrs Dalloway or Ulysses, which is done to convey an atmosphere. You're writing an academic argument that needs readers to understand. USE FUCKING FULL STOPS DICKHEADS.
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